May 13, 2008
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weak day poetics ...
Tuesday's Trane
scattered every direction
dissonance
one difference
no drummer
to
catch
me
if
I
fall
---Ed Kaz
Tuesday's Trane
scattered every direction
dissonance
one difference
no drummer
to
catch
me
if
I
fall
---Ed Kaz
Comments (17)
Nice... will we be blessed with each day of the week?
@angi1972 - Shh! Don't jinx it! (I'm going for a perfect game)
oops! biting tongue now... ouch! Damn it!
@angi1972 - Don Rickles has a biting tongue.
Dude! Your poetic voice is growing!
RYC: I had not considered that, but now I will. Thanks!
I'm digging this new, poetic side of you.
RYC: Don't call me Saudia, Edward.
@SaadiaOnline - That was a first and only spelling, for satiric purposes. I recognize and honor the sanctity of your name.
@Ed_Kaz - Thank you, Edmund. Likewise.
I forgot to tell you this: my favorite lines of your poem are "dissonance/one difference."
hello Ed
Are you playing with your instrument in public again Ed?
one of your better poems capt'n ~ jack
Your poetry is like razors to my eyes. My spirit bleeds.
@TarotBabe - You sure it's not just the lasic vision operation you had last week?
Your poetry is a mist. Droplets of human dew. I am refreshed by your water.
If it were Tuesday
Truly Tuesday
Then
The vines would scream
Colors of purple fruit
Wine
But not yet
If it were Tuesday
Truly Tuesday
Then
Crisp linens snap
Against a pale blue sky
Still damp from the morning
If it were Tuesday
Truly Tuesday
Then
Tired eyes rubbed sore
Wince at the sunlight
Dry hands crack
If it were Tuesday
Truly Tuesday
Then.
@TarotBabe - Whoa. Dat's some poetry ya got dere.
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